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 Post subject: Commentary: Maria In the Wild
 Post Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:27 pm 
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Here is where you guys can talk about whatever you want to say about the story.

Stuff may include:

- What you think of the story

- What you want to see happen

- Anything you do not understand

- Ect

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Negative comments are welcome, I mean - A story teller has to be open to criticism, but just note that if you take it to far, you will not get to see the ending to the story.
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[Troll/Flame removed. Please observe forums rules. -Calan]

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 Post subject: Re: Commentary for: Maria In the Wild
 Post Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:46 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Commentary for: Maria In the Wild
 Post Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 3:52 pm 
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Thank you, JB.

[ You bet. :) -JB ]

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 Post subject: Re: Commentary: Maria In the Wild
 Post Posted: Thu Nov 04, 2010 4:44 pm 
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P.S: Kingsean12's negative comment's don't count. (Since I know he will leave them)
Oh, okay then. Would you kindly fix the grammar?

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 Post subject: Re: Commentary: Maria In the Wild
 Post Posted: Mon Nov 08, 2010 12:17 pm 
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Please reread Maria in the Wild and feedback for the first chapter. I have started the story over, because Maria looks like an idiot, getting lost in the woods as a Ravenclaw, so the new story is, she studies the animals.

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